Sunday, November 21, 2010

Listen!

to slow
dance
of a falling
autumn
leaf:
ki
chk
chchk
tae

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There is something interesting about this piece, that its feeling changes with how I read it. When I read it normal/fast it becomes upbeat and funny/witty, when I read it slow it becomes sad, and when I read it very slow, it gives me a meditative vibe :D

8 comments:

  1. watch, how is falls and breaks my heart...

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  2. Sorry to hear that :(
    I was in a bad mood this morning
    but I did small things
    and little by little
    I felt better ;)

    Be strong and be kind to yourself!
    Dear Grumpy

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  3. Lotus jaan, merci...it is hard to be kind when everybody else is not kind to me...I am tired of people...

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  4. Maybe go to a garden and watch birds, trees, and animals ... it soothes me sometimes!

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  5. Absolutely loved this haiku...

    PS: last Friday I wrote a long comment on your post about symmetric/ asymmetric life, which for some reason didn't go through. Maybe later...

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  6. Thanks Nava.

    I know, it is disappointing to write something and then ... puff, it is gone! Thanks for trying :)

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